Wednesday, January 27, 2010
Conspiracy on the Moon - Karen Y
I found this research easier than the rest since you could just pick a side and then find all the information you needed. This time there were only two sides to pick from, so it wasn't as complicated. I found the fact that many people thought the footprints were just wet sand very interesting because it shows that not many people are willing to do their research.
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That was very informative. I liked how u showed the two sides and how you can disprove what people are saying. I thought that when you added your opinion in it made for a very good essay. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good and well-written essay, Karen! I like that you researched and wrote about both sides, but at the end you added your own opinion. Great job
ReplyDeleteThis is a great essay! I really like that you talked about both sides, and then added your opnion! Great job overall.
ReplyDeleteYou did a really good job of laying the facts out on this essay. I think you also sounded very convincing. For me, the idfficult thing with these cases is who to beleive. One source might say that Russia never tried to land on the moon, and another just as reliable source might say that it did. You never know.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Karen! I agree with the other comments above, I liked how you wrote about both sides and your information was great! Nice Job!
ReplyDeleteThis is a reallly good essay! You have the both sides of the arguement, prove everything really thoroughly, and state your opinion. Great job!
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